tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post12338575899055285..comments2023-08-18T00:34:34.188-07:00Comments on La Vita Boca: I Know BalanceWillowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12144768922185244207noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-31574104930874759242012-02-26T08:41:16.285-08:002012-02-26T08:41:16.285-08:00Wow, this is amazing, Willow. The ending is such ...Wow, this is amazing, Willow. The ending is such a surprise to my senses!Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-13564296650169316202012-02-21T18:16:35.286-08:002012-02-21T18:16:35.286-08:00I fear for all fields that border railroad tracks ...I fear for all fields that border railroad tracks and have to endure those sparking wheels!<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/02/19/haiku-and-senryu-a-bakers-dozen-2/" rel="nofollow">Whirling Haiku</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-43612772713235661092012-02-20T18:48:34.934-08:002012-02-20T18:48:34.934-08:00interesting poem. I used to walk the railroad trac...interesting poem. I used to walk the railroad tracks as a kid., lucky i never got into trouble for, just reminder to listen for the train.Cathyhttp://thequietone.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-35734951538133875952012-02-20T15:59:06.163-08:002012-02-20T15:59:06.163-08:00Profound... and the ending is really good.Profound... and the ending is really good.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-56316322760923560702012-02-20T07:15:48.443-08:002012-02-20T07:15:48.443-08:00Sometimes when I think of balance I think of the b...Sometimes when I think of balance I think of the blind Lady Justice statue. And sometimes I just wish I had a bigger beam :)Juleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-65277655940676507482012-02-20T06:45:45.989-08:002012-02-20T06:45:45.989-08:00I love the ending especially, Willow. Darkness il...I love the ending especially, Willow. Darkness illuminated with hope.brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2012/02/19/to-my-muse/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-23563314865320208662012-02-20T05:43:33.099-08:002012-02-20T05:43:33.099-08:00I like it, Willow. And, I like that I wasn't s...I like it, Willow. And, I like that I wasn't sure where the poem was going, which carried me more closely with it. I'm laughing at myself. I have just reread the poem for the sixth time, because I keep finding more things. Well done.<br /><br />margomargonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-44525265213670825832012-02-20T05:32:28.255-08:002012-02-20T05:32:28.255-08:00It is important to know balance, but sometimes ach...It is important to know balance, but sometimes achieving it is difficult!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com