tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post4553040735695687274..comments2023-08-18T00:34:34.188-07:00Comments on La Vita Boca: Secret AgentWillowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12144768922185244207noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-12629459135139216002011-08-21T06:57:03.409-07:002011-08-21T06:57:03.409-07:00I like the ending on this one much better..happy e...I like the ending on this one much better..happy ending. :) You are good at these wordles.Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-41855063188526412512011-08-10T22:42:39.404-07:002011-08-10T22:42:39.404-07:00tight and evocative. I like "rusty scars&quo...tight and evocative. I like "rusty scars" and love the serene beauty of the last stanza.Victorianoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-9785451357205304372011-08-10T20:55:14.832-07:002011-08-10T20:55:14.832-07:00Love the Zen-like compactness of this and the stru...Love the Zen-like compactness of this and the structure. The last stanza is especially beautiful.Kelly Eastlundhttp://www.starsandwillows.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-20262202200192113252011-08-09T17:42:06.989-07:002011-08-09T17:42:06.989-07:00Willow, this is beautifully written. I love think...Willow, this is beautifully written. I love thinking about those prophets walking across cement in the morning sun!Marynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-47602022065448410302011-08-09T06:21:31.734-07:002011-08-09T06:21:31.734-07:00Thank you everyone. Traci, I like your suggestion...Thank you everyone. Traci, I like your suggestion very much, it's done.Willowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12144768922185244207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-22657902874054687932011-08-08T15:13:47.712-07:002011-08-08T15:13:47.712-07:00Great poem, Belle! You could even reverse the fir...Great poem, Belle! You could even reverse the first and third stanzas and end the poem on the first stanza's hopeful note, if you were so inclined.Traci Bhttp://poemflow.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-56876634551753337042011-08-08T13:18:16.339-07:002011-08-08T13:18:16.339-07:00The interesting title drags one right in. Succinct...The interesting title drags one right in. Succinctly written.Mike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-49891334473003389132011-08-08T12:39:54.684-07:002011-08-08T12:39:54.684-07:00Good job with the wordle Belle! Very mysterious a...Good job with the wordle Belle! Very mysterious and Bellesque! I like it a lot.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-68482310046727566242011-08-08T10:36:14.591-07:002011-08-08T10:36:14.591-07:00Simple and quite beautiful! I really like this. :...Simple and quite beautiful! I really like this. :-)Susannahhttp://panopticulated.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-47501917503534161322011-08-08T02:08:24.123-07:002011-08-08T02:08:24.123-07:00Nicely done but liked the first one the best...a h...Nicely done but liked the first one the best...a healing touch!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.com