tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post7025308222416619917..comments2023-08-18T00:34:34.188-07:00Comments on La Vita Boca: Willowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12144768922185244207noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-37017584145195722782012-05-29T20:14:30.274-07:002012-05-29T20:14:30.274-07:00This poem is a happy ending.This poem is a happy ending.Willowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12144768922185244207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-57527357832818749992012-05-19T07:17:06.898-07:002012-05-19T07:17:06.898-07:00yes pine trees can overwhelm a forest, nice oneyes pine trees can overwhelm a forest, nice oneChristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-89274548613286820462012-05-19T05:32:45.480-07:002012-05-19T05:32:45.480-07:00I like how you describe the sap so fully...gives t...I like how you describe the sap so fully...gives this poem a sticky feel and when speaking of foot holds a neat image in the mind. Great poem, Willow!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-40210385675767937022012-05-18T10:55:56.354-07:002012-05-18T10:55:56.354-07:00This actually gave me a kind of uneasy feeling, bu...This actually gave me a kind of uneasy feeling, but I liked it!Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-58575951897455638642012-05-18T03:22:50.645-07:002012-05-18T03:22:50.645-07:00I read this totally differently from everyone, app...I read this totally differently from everyone, apparently...with its needles and sticky white sharp...its need for a spine, attempt to get a foothold, sun filtered dark... Isn't that a great thing about poetry? Someone's forest is someone else's hell. Really cool poem!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-16517311569967479902012-05-17T12:39:17.293-07:002012-05-17T12:39:17.293-07:00This is lovely Willow!This is lovely Willow!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-48824267054491201132012-05-17T06:19:03.881-07:002012-05-17T06:19:03.881-07:00This is intriquing and simply beautiful. I could s...This is intriquing and simply beautiful. I could smell the pines.Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-47529865115889704812012-05-17T03:18:34.139-07:002012-05-17T03:18:34.139-07:00I can smell the resin from here...thanks! :)I can smell the resin from here...thanks! :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-14955822325532973002012-05-16T19:43:06.403-07:002012-05-16T19:43:06.403-07:00I really enjoyed the flow in this. I live with for...I really enjoyed the flow in this. I live with forests of pines and needles close by... and love it.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-12665159470589768372012-05-16T17:39:14.431-07:002012-05-16T17:39:14.431-07:00I too like the rhythm of this one. Very lovely wri...I too like the rhythm of this one. Very lovely write! Thanks for posting.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-80354158110005168312012-05-16T15:52:14.767-07:002012-05-16T15:52:14.767-07:00ha i really like the beat in this...the resin is h...ha i really like the beat in this...the resin is hard to get out of hair at times though you know...smiles...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-23901988357208046332012-05-16T09:41:30.807-07:002012-05-16T09:41:30.807-07:00Lovely romp through your forest ... I live in sun ...Lovely romp through your forest ... I live in sun too!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-116542930576002667.post-90836438554028607622012-05-16T09:30:29.806-07:002012-05-16T09:30:29.806-07:00So lovely. This captures the feeling of a forest.....So lovely. This captures the feeling of a forest....."I live in sun....filter etches forest shadows". Beautiful.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com