In the Pleat of Essence
Dappled light
I walk the beach
find a shell
salty air
memory reignites
old love
a sort of delirium
piercing
seems to emit
a strident pitch
a hollow feeling
in the pleat of essence
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I like how you have kept it simple, yet powerful... "in the pleat of essence" sticks with you, it's so beautiful.
ReplyDeleteConcise and very economically written!! Yet was power packed!! The words just seemed to latch on to the next!!
ReplyDelete"In the pleat of essence" is a gorgeous line. I love the simplicity and clean lines of this sophisticated piece!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Laurie and Marianne. "In the pleat of essence" is a beautiful title and beautiful line! I love what you did with the words.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautifully written and conveys so much. Very evocative. penny
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful and so well written. I love your poetry!
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