LIfe as poetry
It is important to know balance, but sometimes achieving it is difficult!
I like it, Willow. And, I like that I wasn't sure where the poem was going, which carried me more closely with it. I'm laughing at myself. I have just reread the poem for the sixth time, because I keep finding more things. Well done.margo
I love the ending especially, Willow. Darkness illuminated with hope.
Sometimes when I think of balance I think of the blind Lady Justice statue. And sometimes I just wish I had a bigger beam :)
Profound... and the ending is really good.
interesting poem. I used to walk the railroad tracks as a kid., lucky i never got into trouble for, just reminder to listen for the train.
I fear for all fields that border railroad tracks and have to endure those sparking wheels!Whirling Haiku
Wow, this is amazing, Willow. The ending is such a surprise to my senses!
It is important to know balance, but sometimes achieving it is difficult!
ReplyDeleteI like it, Willow. And, I like that I wasn't sure where the poem was going, which carried me more closely with it. I'm laughing at myself. I have just reread the poem for the sixth time, because I keep finding more things. Well done.
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I love the ending especially, Willow. Darkness illuminated with hope.
ReplyDeleteSometimes when I think of balance I think of the blind Lady Justice statue. And sometimes I just wish I had a bigger beam :)
ReplyDeleteProfound... and the ending is really good.
ReplyDeleteinteresting poem. I used to walk the railroad tracks as a kid., lucky i never got into trouble for, just reminder to listen for the train.
ReplyDeleteI fear for all fields that border railroad tracks and have to endure those sparking wheels!
ReplyDeleteWhirling Haiku
Wow, this is amazing, Willow. The ending is such a surprise to my senses!
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