LIfe as poetry
Wow, Willow. I really like what you did with this. The second stanza is strong but sad. You tell it like it is!
I like the image of the wax melting like tears, Willow.
The imagination is explosive here! Nice nice nice :)
First out of the box ... with a great poem!
Oh excellent!! I really like this. Very tactile and visual.
Wow. This was brilliant and very poignant. So many times we wear masks to cover our true feelings while we are "melting" inside. Nicely done!
Very good...this is really genius!
Wow how good is that!!!
Love the way all sorts of suggestions and allusions seem to hover in the background as I read.
I like the jack-o-lantern image - pasting a big smile. You would think that everyone could tell that the smile is fake, but I guess most people see "Jack" & not "lantern."
Poignant and good. Short and full.
Wow, Willow. I really like what you did with this. The second stanza is strong but sad. You tell it like it is!
ReplyDeleteI like the image of the wax melting like tears, Willow.
ReplyDeleteThe imagination is explosive here! Nice nice nice :)
ReplyDeleteFirst out of the box ... with a great poem!
ReplyDeleteOh excellent!! I really like this. Very tactile and visual.
ReplyDeleteWow. This was brilliant and very poignant. So many times we wear masks to cover our true feelings while we are "melting" inside. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteVery good...this is really genius!
ReplyDeleteWow how good is that!!!
ReplyDeleteLove the way all sorts of suggestions and allusions seem to hover in the background as I read.
ReplyDeleteI like the jack-o-lantern image - pasting a big smile. You would think that everyone could tell that the smile is fake, but I guess most people see "Jack" & not "lantern."
ReplyDeletePoignant and good. Short and full.
ReplyDelete