Sunday, January 29, 2012

Earth Took Me

Frozen in place 
anguish twists
where on earth to
    go

Flame field startles
shocks all serenity
frozen my feet
    go

Born of flame
permeable fire
feet thaw
    go

Earth took me
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7 comments:

  1. MaryJanuary 30, 2012 at 4:55 AM

    Stunning, Willow. You used the words to give maximum impact! Whew.

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  2. Janet MartinJanuary 30, 2012 at 1:54 PM

    Excellent wordle filled with stunning imagery! Well done!

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  3. VictoriaJanuary 30, 2012 at 5:21 PM

    painful, powerful, primal.

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  4. brenda wJanuary 30, 2012 at 7:50 PM

    The repetition of "go" works well, Willow. I love this piece. It is a wonderful write!

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  5. AmberFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:28 AM

    I felt the pain while reading this! So powerfully written!

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  6. MargaretFebruary 8, 2012 at 9:31 AM

    frozen anguish, flame thaws... yes, that is earth alright!

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  7. Judy RoneyFebruary 13, 2012 at 6:43 PM

    Love your use of the words in this Wordle!

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