LIfe as poetry
I like the form and creative wording of this poem, first stanza similar to the last. Ah, yes, and I can picture the 'horizontal slowly.'
I like the construction of this poem, how the first stanza and the last are almost the same! Nice writing.
Your poem evokes the image of the slow passing of time that can be seen and felt on some lethargic days by the dust reflecting in the sunlight. At last, aren't we like dust hovering slowly through time, visible just for short moments in the light of life? - Thank you for this.