Sunday, January 29, 2012

Earth Took Me

Frozen in place 
anguish twists
where on earth to
    go

Flame field startles
shocks all serenity
frozen my feet
    go

Born of flame
permeable fire
feet thaw
    go

Earth took me


7 comments:

  1. Stunning, Willow. You used the words to give maximum impact! Whew.

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  2. Excellent wordle filled with stunning imagery! Well done!

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  3. The repetition of "go" works well, Willow. I love this piece. It is a wonderful write!

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  4. I felt the pain while reading this! So powerfully written!

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  5. frozen anguish, flame thaws... yes, that is earth alright!

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  6. Love your use of the words in this Wordle!

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