LIfe as poetry
You write such beautiful nature poems. Chapbook!
A very nice feel to this...makes me wish I were in that moment, watching.
Lovely reciprocity of nature :)
you see meseeing youA discovery or a friendly banter! Nicely Willow!Hank
superb poem about an incredibly special bird. Their eyes really are soul deep. You've caught their magic, and their being, beautifully.
Nice moment of eye contact caught here, Willow. Beautiful.
beautiful... that intimacy of connection, one being to another.
Delightful! We often watch the birds...watching us, and you captured that so well!
A delightful read, reminding us that we somehow touch what we see and interact with. Very nice.
I love this - you remind me of Mary Oliver, my fave poet ever! I love the exchanged glances, and the wonderings.....
Very nice play on the words and the beginning and ending. Perfect
do you see me seeing you. like that
I am a voyeur watching you watching the bird. The layers of perspective make this brief piece quite powerful, effective. The bird's eye view... of course!
Like the cyclical nature of this. Agree with Kim above-we are now watching you watching the bird :)
I like this very much. Clever - and insightful (pun intended.) I love spotting ospreys.
Drat, I left the final ? off!