Friday, January 7, 2011

Lunes 3-5-3

Out My Window Part 2

Drops cascade
shatter through the screen
explosion

gutters ring
rain splatters on bricks
percussion

lightening sears
tree trunks on fire
sirens sound

sky lightens
percussion winds down
just drop sounds

it's over
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2 comments:

  1. MaryJanuary 8, 2011 at 4:36 AM

    I love the way you have written thewe observatory lunes. They tell a story.

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  2. Peggy GoetzJanuary 8, 2011 at 2:55 PM

    Belle, you have been so quiet about your blogging! I am so glad Mary put in a reminder to check it out again. I had given up. Wonderful to see you putting your wonderful work out her for others to share!

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