Sunday, August 14, 2011

Freedom of Sedition

I tremor with excitement
to sew tuft of the stigma
over and over enmesh it
in the sporadic design
of our seditious flag
we plaster handbills
sacred pledge that 
no nether group hinder
our tread toward freedom


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12 comments:

  1. brenda wAugust 14, 2011 at 6:34 PM

    Well Done! This is quite a statement in so few words---wordle words nonetheless. Bravo!

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  2. flaubertAugust 14, 2011 at 7:45 PM

    Concise piece of writing.

    Pamela

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  3. gautami tripathyAugust 14, 2011 at 10:15 PM

    So true..

    hinder the tremors

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  4. MaryAugust 15, 2011 at 4:51 AM

    Strong sentiments here, Willow. Well wordled!

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  5. AnonymousAugust 15, 2011 at 7:33 AM

    A clever use of some difficult words in a short and concise poem.
    I had a picture in my head of a young, idealistic freedom fighter.
    Thanks for a great read.

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  6. Traci BAugust 15, 2011 at 10:40 AM

    Good use of the wordle in a very patriotic sounding poem, Willow. I enjoyed this one immensely.

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  7. PeggyAugust 16, 2011 at 2:03 PM

    Excellent wordle response! It feels like there's a story here. Write on!

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  8. NankaAugust 17, 2011 at 2:19 AM

    That was excellent, clear and to the point in so few words .... and the wordle words have been used to best effect!!

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  9. AnonymousAugust 17, 2011 at 8:46 AM

    short and strong...a steaming espresso of a poem.

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  10. cathyAugust 18, 2011 at 7:23 PM

    What a great battle cry!

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  11. Judy RoneyAugust 21, 2011 at 6:50 AM

    This is an amazing wordle! I feel the fever for freedom in here.

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  12. Mr. WalkerAugust 28, 2011 at 10:09 AM

    I love those last four lines. That is a pledge that I'll take.

    Richard

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