Sunday, August 14, 2011

Freedom of Sedition

I tremor with excitement
to sew tuft of the stigma
over and over enmesh it
in the sporadic design
of our seditious flag
we plaster handbills
sacred pledge that 
no nether group hinder
our tread toward freedom


13 comments:

  1. Well Done! This is quite a statement in so few words---wordle words nonetheless. Bravo!

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  2. Concise piece of writing.

    Pamela

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  3. Strong sentiments here, Willow. Well wordled!

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  4. A clever use of some difficult words in a short and concise poem.
    I had a picture in my head of a young, idealistic freedom fighter.
    Thanks for a great read.

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  5. Good use of the wordle in a very patriotic sounding poem, Willow. I enjoyed this one immensely.

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  6. Excellent wordle response! It feels like there's a story here. Write on!

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  7. That was excellent, clear and to the point in so few words .... and the wordle words have been used to best effect!!

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  8. short and strong...a steaming espresso of a poem.

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  9. This is an amazing wordle! I feel the fever for freedom in here.

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  10. I love those last four lines. That is a pledge that I'll take.

    Richard

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