LIfe as poetry
A stark, bare (as a bulb) poem of life, someone's life! Another strong poem, Willow. Makes me gasp.
Lean, spare, incisive!
Fabulous Willow. Wow!!
Mother nature nurtures our pain, yes she does. Blight is a rich word....it might show up in a wordle. :)
As Mary said, stark ... and powerful!
Concise, and good.Has me trying to place an ash in my tree index. Don't know that I've seen one.
Oh Willow! You constantly outdo yourself. Wow.
This is really powerful. I have been trying to find the words to describe the quality it has, and the best I can come up with is to steal one of your lines "under bare bulb light". Very nice writing!
What a raw picture you paint of pain and the way some try to cope with it. Compact and very film noire.
Whoa - that's raw and powerfully
Powerful poem!hitching a ride in rusted trails
I'm thankful for the cleansing at the end. Your contribution is stark, and true. Thanks for shining a little light in the dark.