LIfe as poetry
Oh, how I love that word sumpting. I shall use it after a sumpt of chocolate!
good weaving of the poem through the selective words :) liked it!
Ha! I just commented about swallows dancing on Peggy's offering, and here is yet another glimpse of their flight/dance. The darkness at the end is sadly true. And I thank you for using the word sumpting...'tis a grand introduction for me. It may find it's way into one of my pieces, I love learning new words. Thank you Willow. Concise, lovely, and dark. What a great combo. :) I love this piece.
Like Brenda, I really like the word 'sumpting.' And ah, the swallows have their own very fine style of ballroom dancing, don't they?
Another concise write. I don't know how you do it.
Oooh, I join the rest in like the word 'sumpting' you used the words well. :-)
I love what you have done with the wordle words. Less is definitely more here! This is a wonderful short poem.
I love this image of the swallows in their ballet of flight and then the stunning burst of reality at the end.