LIfe as poetry
This is good Willow. I gave it several reads, and my impressions changed a bit each time. Lovely phrasing.
So much said in so few words. I agree with Brenda, a lovely write.
Add my similar sentiments to the above, Willow. Concise and expressive.
Willow, this is good! I liked the 'perhaps' ending, as if it is still a bit questionable! This is, I think, my favorite of wordle poems you have written.
I do like that "brilliance perhaps" ending.
I love the way its so small yet so captivating :) hatts off!
Good write of the wordle! I do love to see where the words take people.
That secret grief is so painful!
Nice to see your work on your blog, Willow. I miss it when it's not here/ Wonderful to see you are a Wordler"
I'm so surprised you got them all to fit with so little extra of your own words. Amazing really! Very good writing!!
excellent and concise use of the words. Very good.
Your piece carries hopefulness... carefully. Visiting from Sunday Whirl and look forward to seeing you next week.
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Willow:I'm having trouble posting my comment, so I'm adding it here. My apologies.This is a brilliant use of the wordle words: crisp, to the point and so expressive!