LIfe as poetry
I know that feeling.....exactly! Let me hold your hand.
Thank you, Mary. Let me hold your hand.
Yes, Willow, I get it. Such a subtle shift from the "we" in the first stanza to the "me" in your last stanza. Love and Hugs to you both.
A journey of discovery best accomplished alone. Even if it's as simple as going to the library. Nicely Willow!Hank
Yes, it is difficult to be alone on a journey ~ Lovely share ~
Very poignant. My heart goes out to you.
I know the feeling. Sometimes we need to go it alone though because it makes us stronger, but I still don't wish it on anyone. Great writing.
There is so much in life that we must do alone. This piece is so poignant--lovely, lovely write
What an incredible poem. I know my father-in-law shares these feelings. Should be "we". You said it perfectly.
Short and sincere. Heartfelt love shines through words. A parent is much different than a spouse.
ugh, it is def hard...even with people around loneliness can take us...
I know that feeling.....exactly! Let me hold your hand.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mary. Let me hold your hand.
ReplyDeleteYes, Willow, I get it. Such a subtle shift from the "we" in the first stanza to the "me" in your last stanza. Love and Hugs to you both.
ReplyDeleteA journey of discovery best accomplished alone. Even if it's as simple as going to the library. Nicely Willow!
ReplyDeleteHank
Yes, it is difficult to be alone on a journey ~ Lovely share ~
ReplyDeleteVery poignant. My heart goes out to you.
ReplyDeleteI know the feeling. Sometimes we need to go it alone though because it makes us stronger, but I still don't wish it on anyone. Great writing.
ReplyDeleteThere is so much in life that we must do alone. This piece is so poignant--lovely, lovely write
ReplyDeleteWhat an incredible poem. I know my father-in-law shares these feelings. Should be "we". You said it perfectly.
ReplyDeleteShort and sincere. Heartfelt love shines through words. A parent is much different than a spouse.
ReplyDeleteugh, it is def hard...even with people around loneliness can take us...
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