LIfe as poetry
Wow. This is good, Willow. Interesting and dark, depending on perspective. I love how it's open to interpretation. Nicely done!
Enjoyed your poem - makes me wonder where the train will stop to find rapture?
Oh yeah! Excellent.
This is open to many ways of interpretation. How you've played with the words is wonderful. I like "each inhale on the train I swallow."
Amazing how complex a picture you painted with so few words.
Which train is it that makes you swallow so? A Whirl with Stanley Kunitz
Excellent and very impressive wow