Sunday, June 2, 2013

Prairie


Prairie


Halls swirl
rumble motion 
vault ceilings

I nimble on
limbs 
crave rapture

each inhale
on the train
I swallow

7 comments:

  1. Wow. This is good, Willow. Interesting and dark, depending on perspective. I love how it's open to interpretation. Nicely done!

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  2. Enjoyed your poem - makes me wonder where the train will stop to find rapture?

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  3. This is open to many ways of interpretation. How you've played with the words is wonderful. I like "each inhale on the train I swallow."

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  4. Amazing how complex a picture you painted with so few words.

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  5. Excellent and very impressive wow

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