Saturday, August 31, 2013

Evening


Evening

All day storm advances
inky sky threatens
lightening shoots sparks
sunset bathes clouds
in feathery scarlet
puddles a mirage of wet colors
I sway in doubt lost in a hole 
from too close introspection 

6 comments:

  1. The image of sunset bathing clouds in feathery scarlet is beautiful. I love how you captured a storm.

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  2. Doesn't sound like a very pleasant storm to be involved in.

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  3. Very concise use of the words that paints a precise picture of the scene. Nicely done.

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  4. I particularly liked "...puddles a mirage of wet colors..."

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  5. Imagery is as visual as I've read today. Well written, Willow.

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