wafts through the window
ample breeze after sunset
flawed granite set aglow
above monkeys shriek
in earsplitting whistle
little demons trapped
scrap with each other
I view the montage
can't see the difference
monkeys and humans
within their domain
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Nice touch of words for that prompt. Well done.
ReplyDeleteInteresting combination of ideas...like the way that you draw out the comparison in stanza three...
ReplyDeleteI agree! In some regards monkeys and humans are MUCH the same. Nice wordling, Willow.
ReplyDeleteYes, we are so alike. Nice wordling!
ReplyDeleteWell wordled! Monkies and humans all trapped demons shrieking!
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