LIfe as poetry
You have written a poem like a prayer. I like the circular effect given by the repetition.
Nicely done....repeating the first line ties the theme together. vb
Lovely, Diane. The repetition is terrific (Donna talks about that today at http://djvorreyer.wordpress.com/2011/03/12/poetry-tow-truck-11-repeat-yourself/ !)
I like the mantra-like affirmation of the right amount of water and the images that grow within your words.
Water: the elixir of life. A recent news release makes the claim of an organism, which lives on and in acid. Not sure I believe it.
Wonderful because it feels more like a prayer than a simple poem
I love the way you have made Earth come alive; a thoughtful, beautiful, loving poem.