Saturday, July 14, 2012

Grittle

He Feeds Us

Trigger fish rides
sea spray swells
flicks away deep
stuck on land
crack of humility
plant our chain
he feeds us grittle
relishes our gravity
claim our refrain



flicks, swells, spray, grittle, gravity, plant
trigger, relishes, chain, crack, humility, refrain, claim

for sunday whirl: http://sundaywhirl. wordpress.com/2012/07/08/wordle-64/


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12 comments:

  1. MaryJuly 14, 2012 at 8:14 PM

    This is wonderful, Willow!! You def did well with those words.

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  2. Laurie KolpJuly 15, 2012 at 5:32 AM

    Lovely presentation!!

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  3. DaydreamertooJuly 15, 2012 at 5:41 AM

    I agree. Lovely worlde.

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  4. HannahJuly 15, 2012 at 5:49 AM

    Nicely done...love that seaspray!!

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  5. Oak Creek RanchJuly 15, 2012 at 7:42 AM

    Very nice wordle!

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  6. annell4July 15, 2012 at 8:34 AM

    Fun with Words in Wordle!

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  7. joanneJuly 15, 2012 at 9:31 AM

    nice ... describes circle of life to me....

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  8. ElizabethJuly 15, 2012 at 4:52 PM

    Very focused, yet detailed with feelings and images.

    Elizabeth

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  9. ScribblerJuly 15, 2012 at 7:00 PM

    Very sharp. The three-word lines made it abrupt to read, but the story flowed. Great wordle.

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  10. WillowJuly 15, 2012 at 7:53 PM

    Thank you, All, Scribbler thanks.

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  11. JulesJuly 16, 2012 at 6:49 AM

    As quick as a sea spray - delightful to reread. Full of motion in it's brevity.

    I'm here:
    http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/07/sw-wordle-65-evening-odds.html

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  12. AnonymousJuly 16, 2012 at 8:07 AM

    I always admire when a poet can use all the words in a very compact piece. Very nice.

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