Saturday, July 14, 2012

Grittle

He Feeds Us

Trigger fish rides
sea spray swells
flicks away deep
stuck on land
crack of humility
plant our chain
he feeds us grittle
relishes our gravity
claim our refrain



flicks, swells, spray, grittle, gravity, plant
trigger, relishes, chain, crack, humility, refrain, claim

for sunday whirl: http://sundaywhirl. wordpress.com/2012/07/08/wordle-64/


12 comments:

  1. This is wonderful, Willow!! You def did well with those words.

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  2. Nicely done...love that seaspray!!

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  3. nice ... describes circle of life to me....

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  4. Very focused, yet detailed with feelings and images.

    Elizabeth

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  5. Very sharp. The three-word lines made it abrupt to read, but the story flowed. Great wordle.

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  6. Thank you, All, Scribbler thanks.

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  7. As quick as a sea spray - delightful to reread. Full of motion in it's brevity.

    I'm here:
    http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/07/sw-wordle-65-evening-odds.html

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  8. I always admire when a poet can use all the words in a very compact piece. Very nice.

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