Saturday, November 24, 2012

Scent


Scent

I still scent you
here and there
gone

A fleck of sway
skimmed me away
gone

I fell for you
in a bad way
gone

A load of sand
held in my hand
gone

I load and heap
fill over and over
gone

again
I sight my felt
horror 




written for: http://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/wordle/

10 comments:

  1. So much is gone, Willow. This saddens me but makes for good poetry. Well wordled.

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  2. It amazes me how different everyones slant on the same words is. An intriguing piece.

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  3. Seemed so "fun" to read! Thanks.

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  4. So lost, so empty, so gone. Wonderfully written.

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  5. So many ways to say gone, but they all end with the same feeling of horror. Well written and wordled,

    Elizabeth
    http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/11/25/first-kiss/

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  6. Gone... but still there ghostly and empty. Sad and strong.

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  7. Excellent wordle! Gone and gone and gone. Hugs

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  8. luV this poem. reminds me a little of ee cummings.
    i enjoyed the light words skimming over yet their meaning not lost.

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  9. oh, so sad! I like it because I didn't expect it - sparse, yet so full of meaning.

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  10. gone and gone and gone. yes, always. so very thoughtful.

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