LIfe as poetry
It is important to know balance, but sometimes achieving it is difficult!
I like it, Willow. And, I like that I wasn't sure where the poem was going, which carried me more closely with it. I'm laughing at myself. I have just reread the poem for the sixth time, because I keep finding more things. Well done.margo
I love the ending especially, Willow. Darkness illuminated with hope.
Sometimes when I think of balance I think of the blind Lady Justice statue. And sometimes I just wish I had a bigger beam :)
Profound... and the ending is really good.
interesting poem. I used to walk the railroad tracks as a kid., lucky i never got into trouble for, just reminder to listen for the train.
I fear for all fields that border railroad tracks and have to endure those sparking wheels!Whirling Haiku
Wow, this is amazing, Willow. The ending is such a surprise to my senses!