Saturday, June 4, 2011

Stone

Stone

A little hard place
in your heart where
you know something's
not right

Where from the hard place
you try everyday to make it
but you still know it's
not right

what do you do in the hard place?
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4 comments:

  1. MaryJune 5, 2011 at 5:09 AM

    You keep trying.
    You imagine.
    You act as if....
    You ignore...
    You crack...
    You leave..
    You sleep.
    You write poetry.

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  2. Judy RoneyJune 5, 2011 at 5:35 AM

    I hate it when I know things aren't right. That feeling; that hard spot where it won't go away. You captured this well.

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  3. WillowJune 21, 2011 at 7:29 PM

    Thank you, Mary, for posting your response poem here.

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  4. LynneJune 23, 2011 at 11:28 PM

    You recognize it for the hard place it is, and change it, even if only in your heart. Very nice poem, Willow.

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